Yay! A very nice story ;) Definite brotherly fighting in the first part, and a really nice sentiment in the last part. And the last line is really screaming for a sequel.. :hint hint: Great work!

Author's Response: Caught that sibling squabbling, did you? ;) When I started working on this story, oh, I think back in 2006, I always wanted to END it at this point, but leave room for expansion. I\'ve already got an idea for a sequel (possibly series if it keeps momentum) that I\'m mulling over in my brain. Thank you so much for the kind comments! Hopefully it\'ll take me less than a year and half to get the next part out.